Sunday, October 28, 2012

My Father Killed My Father?

My Father Killed My Father?
By Ximena & Saul

Once upon a time there was a boy named Pedro, he was 7 years old. One day his father told him that all the people was tired of the government of Porfirio Diaz, so he told him that he was going to fight against Porfirio with them.
The next day, Pedro noticed that his father was not there and suddenly started crying.

7 years later…
Pedro was now 15 years old now. After his father went to the war Pedro and his mother didn´t know anything about him. His mom started a new life with Jose, her new husband.
One day Jose told them that he was going to the war, Pedro didn´t like that because he had already lost a father there.
Two weeks later he was missing Jose so badly that he decided to go to the war. He was fighting with the soldiers when he saw something that really hurts. He saw Jose being killed by a man. He suddenly felt that there was nothing, he promise to himself revenge.

One year later he saw the man that killed Jose and he remember his promise. All he was thinking about was revenge. He took out a gun and fire.
All he saw was little blood drops all over the place. He got near the now dead body and saw it, his father.

1 comment:

  1. I think is very dramatic because the son kill his father.

    Angel

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